This is our first draft of our video game magazine advert, we are very happy with this so far in comparison to the video game cover because it looks a lot more professional. However changes still need to be made, an example being the issue number and barcode are on the advert which is misleading as that is usually found on the front cover of a magazine. Ours is an advert which will be found in a game magazine. We will make these changes next lesson and update it for our second draft.
