51. Main & Ancillary Task Peer Feedback

Here is some audience feedback we received in today's lesson. The overall comments on our final media products were mainly positive which is good. All of them said we included conventions that can be found in existing products so it looks authentic and real.

50. Ancillary Task 2 Final draft

This is our final design for our video game magazine. We are extremely happy with how it turned out. It matches well with the game cover and adverts. Also It includes all the needed conventions that can be found in actual adverts so it makes ours look real. The magazine flows well with the theme and game.

49. Ancillary Task 1 Final draft

This is our final video game cover, our previous work received positive feedback from our target audience and we are happy with this final design.  We introduced some new colours which are orange and red as we thought they brightened up our design. The same house style on this and our magazine will show continuity, this results in it being easily recognisable.

48. Main Task Final Draft

This is the final draft of our video game adverts. We are happy with the results and feedback from the previous drafts. The comments from them drafts have been made and updated in these adverts.

47. Main & Ancillary Task Audience Feedback

This is some audience feedback we received this week, the video game cover and main task had many positive comments on how creative and promising it looked but our audience still felt it lacked brand identity. We will use these comments as motivation and help to make our media products look even better.

46. Ancillary Task 2 draft 2

This is our second draft for our magazine advert, as you can see not much has changed except for the removal of the price, barcode and issue number. As we feel there wasn't much to change from the first draft. We also added a review and the consoles this game is available to play as extra information to persuade the viewer to buy the game.

45. Ancillary Task 1 draft 2

This is our second draft which we are relatively happy with. It is a huge improvement from our first draft as it links better with our magazine advert and it looks a lot more professional. The effects on the fonts really make the text stand out which is good because it attracts more people. We will be receiving feedback shortly to find out what our target audience think.

44. Main Task Draft 2

Below are the second drafts of our work, we will receive feedback from our target audience this week which will give us information on whether or not they are successful in persuading people to buy our game Evil Clutches.

43. Peer Feedback on Draft 1 of Production Work

Here is some feedback we received from our media teacher. His overall opinion on our work was that it was incomplete but it looked promising. From these comments we will make the recommended changes to achieve authentic final products.